The Girl in the Photograph

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One school day, a boy named Tom was sitting in class and doing math. It was six more minutes until school let out. As he was doing his homework, something caught his eye.

His desk was next to the window, and he turned and looked to the grass outside. It looked like a picture. When school was over, he ran to the spot where he saw it. He ran fast so that no one else could grab it.

He picked it up and smiled. It had a picture of the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. She had a dress with tights on and red shoes, and her hand was formed into a peace sign.

She was so beautiful he wanted to meet her, so he ran all over the school and asked everyone if they knew her or have ever seen her before. But everyone he asked said “No.” He was devastated.

When he was home, he asked his older sister if she knew the girl, but unfortunately she also said “No.” It was very late, so Tom walked up the stairs, placed the picture on his bedside table and went to sleep.

In the middle of the night Tom was awakened by a tap on his window. It was like a nail tapping. He got scared. After the tapping he heard a giggle. He saw a shadow near his window, so he got out of his bed, walked toward his window, opened it up and followed the giggling. By the time he reached it, it was gone.

The next day again he asked his neighbors if they knew her. Everybody said, “Sorry, no.” When his mother came home he even asked her if she knew her. She said “No.” He went to his room, placed the picture on his desk and fell asleep.

Once again he was awakened by a tapping. He took the picture and followed the giggling. He walked across the road, when he was suddenly hit by a car. He died instantly, picture in hand.

The driver got out of the car and tried to help him, but it was too late. He saw the picture and picked it up.

He saw a cute girl holding up three fingers.

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Marlon Schwiersch
Marlon Schwiersch
2 years ago

Hi there, I would like to ask your permission to turn this film into a short film? If you are interested or would like to hear more details, please contact me as soon as possible 🙂

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Blacknoodles23
5 years ago

Loved it just don’t get why 3 fingers

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Z9.duck
5 years ago

so basically the entire story is this kid is dreaming about some chick and then gets hit by a car and dies and theres also this photograph

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Ashka
6 years ago

Very good! its a very interesting concept and the writing was perfect!

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embalmergirl2008
6 years ago

Decent idea, could have used a little more descriptive wording but otherwise nice. Wasn’t what I expected, and was short and sweet. Dig the end twist.

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pokedeath
6 years ago

holy shit that was so dark 5/5

HODA SHERIF
HODA SHERIF
6 years ago

OMG ALL HE WANTED AND DIED WOW COOL MY THEORY IS SHE WAS TO FINGERS CUZ SHE KILLED TWO KIDS OR BOYS NOW SHE KILLED HIM I THINK SOMETHING BAD IS GOING TO HAPPEN WHEN SHE RAISE ALL FINGERS I DON’T KNOW WHY BUT THAT WAS A WONDERFUL STORY

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Kaveh
6 years ago

Dude i translated your story as my essay. Hope you dont mind.

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LittleCreepyGirl
6 years ago

omg what a delicous pasta *licks fingers* heh

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Themidnightcat
6 years ago

Oh, and I give this story a 8/10. Why I did not give the story a 10/10 is she did not just kill him and why the three fingers did she kill three people? I’m so sorry. Midnight out!!! p.s. so far this is the best creepy pasta. I’d tell it to my friend but she doesn’t know what a creepy pasta.