Dancing Shadows

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I look into the night,
And I know I’m in a trance,
As my head turns to the right,
I see the shadows dance.

The voices keep on saying,
Do it, do it, die,
I feel my skull expanding,
At least I have to try.

I can’t take all the screaming,
On the balcony I kneel,
I feel like I am dreaming,
But no dream is this real

I jump towards my death,
I watch the ground get closer,
As my bones rip through my flesh,
I know my life is over…

Now you’ve read my story,
Look out the corner of your eye,
I’m screaming at you hoarsely,
Do it, Do it, DIE!

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BubblyShip
5 years ago

Just listening to the muffin song by Tomska while reading the last line, anyone else?

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DeathSpamZ
5 years ago

Can someone die, please, because I’ve been screaming this poem on my balcony for the last hour and nobody from the other apartments have commited suicide yet.

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FreekyPotato
5 years ago

Nice Chorus “Do it, do it, DIE”
One to be remembered
Nice to see a creepy pasta in poem form

Jeff
Jeff
5 years ago

wow
i loved it
do it do it die

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FlareArrowwood
5 years ago

I already hear voices…
One of the stronger ones tells me I’m pathetic, useless, and a lot of other stuff Lilongwe those lines

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WeepingAngel143
5 years ago

do it. do it. DIE
yeah same

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TheMadGamer
6 years ago

Sounds like a song I heard once.

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LolerioNark
6 years ago

Very creepy! It gave me flashbacks of this time I hallucinated while looking out my window (Not fun times but I love this poem anyways)

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Manila_Rice
6 years ago

Love this story and chillingly poetic style. I hope to see more of your works in the future!

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Nightmarrionne
6 years ago

This wasn’t the creepiest, but it’s nice to see a poem occasionally.