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Black Magic

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Black Magic

Mad Henry was a hermit who lived alone in a decrepit mansion at the edge of town. Rumors were rife about the wild-eyed man. Some folks said that he was a magician who called upon the powers of darkness to wreck havoc upon his neighbors. Others called him a mad doctor who could restore life to foul corpses from the local cemetery. No respectable citizen in town had anything to do with Mad Henry

Then one year a new family moved to town with a lovely daughter, Rachel, who caught Mad Henry’s eye. He showered the maiden with gifts—goblets of pure gold, necklaces of pearl, and a pot of daisies that never dropped a single petal. Despite the gifts, Rachael fell in love with another, Geoffrey, a handsome young man just home from university. A week after meeting they eloped, leaving behind a stunned Mad Henry.

When Rachael and Geoffrey returned from the elopement, they threw a big ball and invited everyone in town. While Rachel was waltzing with her father, she heard a clap of thunder. Lightning flashed again and again. Suddenly, the double doors blew open and a breeze whirled in, bringing with it the smell of dead, decaying things. Mad Henry loomed in the doorway, pupils gleaming red with anger. He was followed by the grotesque figures of the dead, who came marching two by two into the room. Their eye sockets glowed with blue fire as they surrounded the room.
Two of the corpses captured Geoffrey and threw him down at the feet of their lord. Red eyes gleaming, Mad Henry drew a silver-bladed knife and casually cut the bridegroom’s throat from ear to ear. Rachel screamed and ran forward, pushing through the foul, stinking corpses of the dead, and flung herself upon her dying husband.

“Kill us both,” she cried desperately.

But Mad Henry plucked the lass out of the pool of blood surrounding her dead husband and carried her out into the thundering night. Behind him, the army of the dead turned from the grizzly scene and followed their master. The sounds of thunder and lightning faded away as the alchemist and his dead companions disappeared into the dark night.

Geoffrey’s father and Rachael’s father gathered a small mob and followed the evil hermit, intent upon saving Rachel. When they searched Mad Henry’s house, they found it completely empty save for a light, which shone from a series of mysterious globes that bobbed near the ceiling of each room. Mad Henry had vanished.

Search parties scoured the countryside for days, but turned up nothing. Geoffrey was buried in the local cemetery, and the dance hall was torn down. No one in town spoke about what had happened, and no one dared imagine what had become of poor Rachel.

A year to the day after the ball, a timid knock sounded upon the door of Rachael’s parents’ home. When her father opened it, he saw a gaunt, gray figure on the stoop. Her eyes were dull with exhaustion and pain. It was Rachel! Her tongue had been cut out so she couldn’t speak. But when she produced a knife from her tattered garments—the knife with a silver blade that they had last seen in the hands of Mad Henry— the gleam of satisfaction in Rachel’s eyes told them that the streaks of blood that coated the knife were those of Mad Henry. That night, Rachel died in her sleep with a peaceful smile upon her ravaged face.

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toli avatar
7 years ago

I thought this was good like a really quick dark fairy tale…

KelKat_Is_Dead avatar
7 years ago

I honestly don’t understand this story at all

Dragonlordmikey avatar
7 years ago

Dang well at least she’s joining the one she loves and why didn’t the mad doctor just use a spell to make her fall in love with him but either way good job I give 10/10 keep writing

creepypasta_jeff avatar
7 years ago

Kinda remind me of the Masque of the Red Death by Edgar Allan Poe. Nice one!

Croft141516 avatar
8 years ago

Nice story just why did she die?

wingswithwings avatar
8 years ago

There could have been more tags, such as Creatures etc… The story itself was pretty good, it reminded me of the style of Edger Allen Poe’s short stories. Sort-of anyway. Still a great pasta. 4.5/5

8 years ago

rating: amazing but couldve used more title refreance i give this a 8/10 4/5
ideas: the black hole would start as a tiny black sploch that looked like a bug and just got bigger and bigger and then u turn the rest of the story to match, any siblings, followers, aliens, the reason she died? all of that would make it better in my opinion or some more creepyness and a medium not a short 😉

larsen.m.renee avatar
9 years ago

I love this story

Killingz avatar
9 years ago

Mad henry can do many thing including raise the dead but can’t change his looks to make himself look better. Let think about that for a bit.

vishussvixen avatar
9 years ago

i thought this had just the right amount of description, and appreciated the turn it took. after all there are too few bitter sweet endings.

Cream avatar
9 years ago

That was OK however, why did she died without any reason? and you didn’t detailed what did the parents reaction was? what happened before she died in her sleep without any reason? the tags aren’t descriptive. It could have been better, Keep up the work : D。

LIlOne avatar
9 years ago

Well dang O.o …. At least she was happy.