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Locked Doors

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Locked Doors

If ever you should walk into a dark room inside your empty house and see a shadowy figure somewhere within, don’t turn on the lights. It’s better not to know. Don’t run to the bathroom, lock the door, and cower in your bathtub. Don’t hurry to a closet, lock the door, and hide underneath a pile of clothes. And especially don’t return to your bedroom, lock the door, and crawl into your bed. Because every other door in your house was already locked, and the figure still managed to get in.

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slenderdude
slenderdude
6 years ago

i loved it

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Slayer200
6 years ago

That in theory would be creepy except you should have added that the windows were locked.

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LolerioNark
7 years ago

This happened before to me. I walked into my sibling’s room to pass through and go to the washroom that was attached to her bedroom. I look in and saw a shadowy figure. I just closed the door and walked to the downstairs bathroom, used the bathroom, and continued on with my homework xD No frick given.

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Omfi
7 years ago

What if it came through the window

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Omfi
7 years ago

This is disturbing and short as fuck 10/10

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iMeloyNyan
7 years ago

It’s shadowcat

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That0neguy
7 years ago

Well what if farted and my house blew up? And the figure died because of my stink.

Other than that, this pasta was delicious.

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MetallicaFan
7 years ago

Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Creeped me out a bit! 🙂
5/5

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FlamingGhoul369
7 years ago

So. I’m an idiot. Yes, I really am. In this situation, my idioticalness would probably telepathically turn on the lights and chuck me at the creature. Don’t ask why, but it would. I’d be dead.

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CarmillaKarnstein
7 years ago

A bit more explaining would be nice. Otherwise an amazing pasta.

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LiliththeDollmaker
8 years ago

I’m afraid of the dark so I always turn on the ights before walking in. And why locks on the doors inside the house?

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TheMadGamer
8 years ago

Most of the doors in my house don’t have locks and a couple of the ones that do don’t work properly. [spoiler]shiiiiiiiiiiiiit[/spoiler]

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chingchongboy
8 years ago

dude no way

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Creepa99
8 years ago

Good pasta I would probably run and live with my grandparents.

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NoFace
8 years ago

Short pastas are my favorite!

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lovevil
8 years ago

I would probably stare at it to see what it does…lol id be dead.

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handspeed
8 years ago

It was good, not great, but good. It couldve been better. 3/5[spoiler]im the shadowy figure.[/spoiler]

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1fkedworld
8 years ago

Makes sence I guess.

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Meh
8 years ago

Oh, well then, that would explain the feeling of fearI get that tells me to leave my door wide open and NOT WALK AROUND IN THE FREAKING DARKNESS

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PrototypeSCARE
8 years ago

Five Seconds of Fear