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The Closet

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The Closet

Open your closet, don’t turn on the light. Make sure you have one match with you. Step inside and close the door. If the lights outside of the closet are on, this will not work. Nor will it work if it is daylight. The only room you need is enough for slight mobility.

Stand in the darkness for about two minutes, since that’s all that’s needed. Now, take the match and hold it in front of you and say, “Show me the light or leave me in darkness.” If you begin hearing whispers light the match immediately. If you don’t hear anything, and the match doesn’t ignite on it’s own then don’t turn around. If you light the match too late or not at all after hearing whispers, something will grab you from behind and pull you into what seems like a forever fall into darkness.

If you do manage to light the match in time and nothing happens after, open the door slowly and get out, then close the door but do NOT look inside. From then on, never look inside your closet without the light on at all. Some say if you leave your closet open during the night you can see the demon watching you with two red eyes that glow like matches.

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Randomkiddo868
7 months ago

I loved it, but im curoius, what would happen if we looked into the closet????
Overall 8/10

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DrJagged
6 years ago

Mom: “SON! DINNERTIME RIGHT NOW!”

Son: “WAIT MON LET ME SUMMON THE DEMON IN MY CLOSET REAL QUICK. I’LL ONLY BE 5 MINUTES!

Overall 7.5/10

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CodMinotaurBarbaria
4 months ago
Reply to  DrJagged

oh thats pretty funny

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DeathSpamZ
6 years ago

I don’t ge it. Why are there so many people hating on it? How the hell did it even get past review in the first place?

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ab107604
6 years ago

a pretty strange story kinda like instructions to do something but for what purpose?

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ViolentViolet666
7 years ago

What is the motivation to do this? Add something good to get out of it, and this could be a good pasta

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Hellnaw
7 years ago

Feels like an alternate version to the midnight man creepypasta. =/ nice attempt but didnt really get me since it felt so similar.

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vertigo
7 years ago

um.. this is not a pasta its telling you how to play the elevator game

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fallen
7 years ago

i feel like it was missing something. like a reason for this ritual

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BooperDooper5547
7 years ago

I’m already afraid of looking into the closet at nighttime so I’m good but good job!

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TeletubbiesAreEvil
7 years ago

1)It’s generic. Immensely so. Nothing original about it.
2)If you don’t give us a reason to do it, like a prize if we succeed (immortality, knowledge, power, a freaking soda can), then it’s a ritual of either eternal damnation or a demon that doesn’t want to admit their homoerotic feelings… So… Why do I want either of those, again…?

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SneakyCreepyPasta
7 years ago

I really enjoyed it very good. 8/10

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MayaRose
7 years ago

This is one of the few ritual pastas that are actually good
Nice job my friend

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PinkOreoCookies
7 years ago

Tried it scared me to death I moved out of that house after

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AnaAndMia
8 years ago

Short and sweet, awesome

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CreepyAlex
8 years ago

I think that demon is me lol xD haven’t come out the closet just yet,

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Ticci-toby1210
8 years ago

Sweet….

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KommanderKookie371
8 years ago

Very cool

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pooperoni
8 years ago

Didn’t work for me, I only have a wardrobe. Furthermore, when I got in there imagine my shock to discover a lion and a witch already there.

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TheSoulMaster
8 years ago

Ok, so sad is a bit harsh but still. Ritual pastas open up so many opportunities to be unique and yet this one just followed some basic guideline for writing a ritual and I just don’t like it. There’s just so much that could’ve been done to make it better.

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Jaydiamond99
8 years ago

Wow! Seriously, dude how old are you. For god’s sake I’ve seen molded bread that sounded scarier.